what are areas of strength for this blog?

Hi. this is Jake. I have reviewed my original blog and see it lacked me. At first I did not see that but after the teachers, and my parents said to reread it I did see the difference. I believe now my new blog has more of me, more of the comparisons to today. I think I have definitely made a better blog this time. Jake

what are areas of improvent for this blog

I think I improved the blog by reviewing it and making it a little less technical. The first blog needed less detail and more me. I was trying to be technically correct and explain the homes of the time, but I quess I needed more me.